This is the first draft edit of the first half of my film opening.
After watching it play through, I felt as though there is something missing from it. I am going to capture some footage of a tree with leaves blowing off of it in a breeze and put that shot between the shots of the dog jumping and the children running. This tree shot will also be effective at showing the beauty of the world as it is before the apocalypse, and foreshadowing what is to come (the leaves blowing off).
I will also be making the swings shot shorter as it lasts too long and makes people realise that they are watching something that somebody filmed with a camera. I am also planning on filming a new shot to go between the shot of the cars, and the shot of the woman chasing after her dog.
Aside from these things, I am happy with the way it looks at the moment.
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